Reflection 3.2

I made a alot of changes in my second draft this time. I switched the order of some of my paragraphs to make it flow a lot better. A better conclusion was added to wrap up my paper, I brought it back around to show the modern teachings of fire safety. I'm not sure if people will think that my conclusion is okay or if it will start another story to them. I do feel that my story is taking up to much space in my paper though and that my argument is still unclear. My goal for my next draft is to add more research and make my argument stronger.