Reflection 3.1

My goal for my first draft was to make sure that I got my whole story down on the paper. I used details in my story to keep my audience's attention and to help them better understand what I went through. I also included a good amount of research in my first draft. The comments from my peers were very helpful to me and I will take everything they said into consideration for my next draft. I was given advice to better organized my essay and to make my agrument clearer. I like the idea that Lauren gave me about rearranging my paragraphs so I can keep my story together. I also plan on going into more detail about my research instead of just simply pluggng it in.