Reflection 2.2

For my second draft I’m aware that I didn’t make a whole lot of changes. I realized in my first draft that though I thought I had included research from scholarly journals, I did not. My main goal for my second draft was correctly formatting my paper. The confusion that I received from my classmates encouraged me to clear up my papers format so it would be easier to identify where a paragraph starts and where it finishes. I also went ahead and added my works citied section to my essay this go round. I attempted to find scholarly journals that are relevant to my topic, but I haven’t had much luck. I noticed that maybe I have careful research broader ideas that revolve around my topic and not just my topic alone. I can search journals that encompass the ideas of things like freedom of the press, just freedom in general, the justice system, and also find out what type of court cases are not allowed to be televised for the viewing of the public. Once I find two scholarly journals to include into my essay I will cite those in my works cited section as well. I also want to work more on the language of my essay to make sure it gives of a rogerian attitude. I feel like I can organize my paper a little better as well to give it a smoother flow for my audience to read, so I will work on make sure that I address certain ideas continuously throughout the essay.