Reflection 1.2

My main focus for writing my second draft was adding some more research. I figured out that I needed to be careful with the research I found because I wanted to make sure it was relevant to the paper. I also went ahead and added a direct quote from my friend in the part where I talk about my personal experiences. I feel like by adding this quote more pathos was created in my argument. I really didn’t focus on trying anything new or different in my second draft because I liked the layout of my argument, and so did my peers in my group. In my next draft I once again attempt to add as much more research and opinions as I can. I will focus on making sure that my paper is clean and understandable for my audience. I also plan on posting my works sited page in my next draft.